Thats was very good nice poem

I'm tired of reading people's comments and seeing the usual one liner. So here's what I thought:

The title seemed angry and powerful for some reason. Probably the word choice.

The imagery, while vivid, deserved to be in the dark section. The crystals, being the stones, right. Maybe take the second the out of the first line before crystals. It might seem better might not but it'll still keep the same impact of the line. I don't know about that one short line between the long ones. It just felt a bit out of place even though the words fit.
Good poem, haunting imagery, powerful descriptions, and an angry type title. Pretty good if you ask me.

This is a very good poem. its deep and well written. the words you use are good. you create a very cynical mood. i like it alot. esp the last couplet nice job!

Excellent written. I really liked this, and I love the way it flows.

Love,
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This was a little too profound for me...but I think you selected the title well although the poem did somewhat stray from the topic. I sensed the voice of the poem was quite critical and the opening stanza was amazing but towards the end it drifted off for me and I finished it feeling confused. Perhaps you could explain it to me sometime?

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow not much to say about that it was rly good 5/5 good job keep up the good work xD

One of the few poems that stunned me :) i loved it alot, the imaginery the use of words and of course the title, the title just made me read it :) excellent use of covabulary :) 5/5

~StefQ

This poem is really good. It is very deep and I like it. It has a good structure and great diction. I can just tell from this piece, you are a very good writer. Keep it up. :)

Very deep. The structure, I'll agree is great and some lines really stood out strongly. The end was great as well. Awesome write.

Peace. [Sole]

I'm presuming that this is a metaphor for false idol worship. In which case: 5/5. If it's something I just don't get... 3/5. :-)

Good, all the same!

That was a really good poem. The title was amazing.. Really great choice there cause it made me really want to read it. You described everything really well. & the flow & rhythm was really good, a bit off at times, but overall really good. Great job on this! I give it a 5/5***

Really good use of language in this peice, flows well and the content vey well expressed. some of the descriptions are very well portrayed and the expressions very powerful.

also great title, really intregs the reader causing them to want to read the peice.

5/5

WOW!!! that was good!! I love your vocabulary (I'm Jealous)! It was beautifully written!! The flow was good and so was the description!! I loved the title!! Most defenatly deserves a 5!! Wonderful Job!! Couldnt change a thing!!

Once again, i just LOVE your style. sooo unique!!! i liked this poem very much 5/5

Very different and very good. Well done!

Nice job, though not my favorite from you.

Dear sondos,

a really beautiful poem. there's so much to learn from this poem. i am happy that u too liked my poems and i also feel good to know that somehow inspire it. keep writing well... and keep on inspiring me to deliver much more better poems. bye.