I love this poem! It's very beautiful and heart felt! I love how your telling that one person goodbye, your not drifting back to other people, you stick with that ONE person. Really good. Thanks for commenting on my poems. Your on my favourites too. Pleasure to read your work. |
I have to say this poem is prolly my favorite i love it! every line means so much wonderful job! |
Wow that is soooo awesome i love it so much,I just wish i wrote it cuz i love it that much..Wow keep writing |
Boy, that was good... I've experienced that by the way... Its no fun at all... ne weiz..., great emphasis...wonderfully written.. |
by w!th0utyou
This is exactly what had happened to me!!! :( ... |
by mandy
Very beautiful and sad. The rhyming was really well thought out and it had a nice flow. I'm sure many could relate to your poem, 5/5. |