Well..my dear..it's..omg..i'm speechless...i hope i'll write someday as good as u :-

This poem is amazing, i've never known someone with so much talent! your excellent, defiently make a book of these poems, seriously, you're the best i've ever read 5/5

Wow... I am... inferior. Nice job.

*DeAtHbYmOnKeYs*

..wow i was confused for a while..lol loved it...good surprise...5/5. im glad im not that guy:)

His voice calm - his words were lies,
Deceiving sounds like flesh that dies.
((My favorite lines..))

Again, with the same topic. It's becoming cliche for you. You tell wonderful stories, and most can't stand to rhyme so long, but it's getting cliche already. You're a wonderful write, but try other subjects.

Anyways, nice poem, again. A nice flow to it, but some parts didn't really make sense.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5