Yes a dark poem...it's been a long time! But anyways, it's an intro to what I'm hoping a poetry book called, "Despair." Hope u enjoy it!

Nice poem michael! I like it, kinda sounds like something I would write. :)

Very dark.
Sad but convincing.
5/5
good words and good structure
great poet.
great poem

Wow awesome poem.. dark but great 5/5

Wow awesome poem.. dark but great 5/5