Comments : Breathless

  • 18 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    This poem is so sweet and cute...and it transmits such a wonderful feeling...thats great
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece very well written keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Honsetly I really like this poem!!
    esp the end..its so sweet and wonderfully ended!!! Ofcourse 5/5 ;)
    I Hope you're Okay!
    Luv Ya
    NemO XxXxXxX

  • Awwwwww...mamii..thiiz iiz liik3 soooooo amaziinggggggg...u hav3 liik3 no id3a...lol...iim sooo lookiin forward to talkiin to u soon...ii miis u liik3 crazii...t3 kii3ro mucho

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Oh this was so sweet, I loooved this poem. Truly amazing. Beautiful written. 5/5 ;) Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Unbreakable

    I really like this. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    Wow. This is how I feel about my boyfriend. Tomorrow we will be going out for 9 months, and im so excited. He means more than the world to me. I love him more than anyone else could. Well your poem was great, 5/5 from me. Keep writing and never let go of how you feel about this person.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    WOW.....I really love this poem. You wrote it so well.
    xoxoxox
    Jess

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachael

    This is really good i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by MeLiSsA

    I really like this poem :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah

    You are an amazing poet/writer. They are very easy to relate to.

  • 17 years ago

    by kayla T

    This is really good ! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie smiles

    Wow.....all i can say is WOW!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    I can relate to this poem is sooo many ways! I thought about my boyfriend Tyler the entire time I read it. I feel the exact same about him which made me fall in love with this poem even more. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~