You're talking about your boyfriend arent you...i'm really sorry that you have to go through this. If he's like this, just leave him...you dont deserve this kind of stuff.

on a happier note, this is quite a good poem :). great rhythm, rhyme, and 'plot'.

You found my unwounded arms,
and made me cause self-harm,
you saw my dry face,
and made me cry myself into a miserable place.

sort of unbalanced, but still my favorite stanza. it had good imagery, and rhyme....

keep it up, and feel better

I like this one...its deep

Mallori

I liked the structure and how the meaning of the poem wasnt sacificed for rhyme.

Stop makin me cry u and heidi both

WOW!!! this poem sounded exactly like a part of my life once, now i know that horrible stuff doesnt just happen to one person.

excellent

october xx

Gd

Nvr commented this??

weird, cuz i love it.

L.O.V.E.

so yeahhh, im prettyyy much gonna say terrific and i secind what tripp said about the flow of that specific stanza.

and my fav is the last two lines....