by uNfOrGiVeNsiN335 Apr 30, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
I wanna look up to her and say, "Mommy, I tried." |
A very touching poem. The dialect made this so real and down-to-earth. You seemed to highlight major parts of special relationship between a mother and daughter...something I know is very precious. The clever use of the word "wanna" however suggested you were unable to do these things which added a dimension of sadness and very emotional and real poem... |