Bloody Tears

by Raychel   Apr 30, 2006


Im bleeding inside,
Inside and out,
i dont think that you care,
but no one seems to care, despite my frantic shouts.

i cant contain the pain,
so it seeps out in bloody tears,
dripping to the ground,
pooling beside me, all around.

so this is what it feels like,
these are my blood tears,
when they splat to the floor,
they let out my fears.

*SO, this SO is not my best poem yet, nor shall it ever be, but i felt like writing about something. dont worry, ppl, i have cut anytime recently, last time i did was almost....like 6 months ago. i think...lol...but comment on it. ttyl.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Well it was good but short im a cuter and i understand my mom thinks i need on medication but im fine just the way i am........

  • 18 years ago

    by AngleofLostHope

    Wicked poem! I luv it! dang...now i wanna read your best !......cant even imagine....keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Good, and don't start cutting either...it doesnt help the issue.

    eh, i agree, you have had better poems, but this one is still pretty good. its filled with emotion, and the rhyme is great. this is a good poem, and it isn't even one of your best...that's saying something about your poetic talent