Good, and don't start cutting either...it doesnt help the issue.

eh, i agree, you have had better poems, but this one is still pretty good. its filled with emotion, and the rhyme is great. this is a good poem, and it isn't even one of your best...that's saying something about your poetic talent

Wicked poem! I luv it! dang...now i wanna read your best !......cant even imagine....keep it up!

Well it was good but short im a cuter and i understand my mom thinks i need on medication but im fine just the way i am........