Please

by amandalynn   Apr 30, 2006


Please help me lord
before i put this razor to work
before i make my wrist into my artwork
blood pouring..
lord help me before before i really hurt myself..
before i lose it all
and never keep my promises ever again
lord help me before i get away from it all the wrong way..
lord please god please help me before i go to hell and rot to pieces

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, good wording ,but you could lay off the before a little killing it, all in all great job,~5/5 your friend Tracy

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    Short but packed full of visions thanks for comment and vote on "Bleeding on the inside"

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    This is so sad and at the same time so good

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