by LadyPearl Apr 30, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
These are only my thoughts. You may agree or disagree. No personal offense to anyone |
by Fallen Angel
Why does this only have a 3 rating??? *Gives it 5 immediately*. A really thought out and emotional poem that highlights a genuine problem in todays society in a very personal, mature and thought out way. Excellent stuff. Was hooked from the beginning to the end! x |
by Disaster
Not bad, I'm personally more fond of writing that has a bit more structure, but as far as they go, this is a good piece of work. With a very true message to it i might add. |