You do pretty good i miscellaneous poems. Better than i do. Nice job.
-Vino

HOlY SHIT! that was great it was so deep it makes me think.. (which it hard to make me do) B-L-O-N-D-E lol

Nice job, that would have been a really hard write.. but you did a wonderful job at it 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Very nice poem.. :) very good, i liked the repetitiveness.. i thought it worked well, good job!