Comments : Unlikely love

  • 18 years ago

    by Luna

    Such a great poem..
    i don not know how it feels to be like that
    for i have not been rejected
    but i love the emotion you use

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I thoroughly enjoyed it.
    The rhyming broke in a few places but it still was quite impressive
    great job
    Hope your love lasts and lasts
    ~Em