Beautiful is all I can say. Beautiful

Wow, this is just so great, i wonder y this one is not voted to its value so far...just loved it all the way.

Stars of imagination, will soon decay.
But under the moonlight, is where we'll stay.
This dream may be over, but love is our chance,
For in my heart forever, is where, together, we'll dance

beautiful stanza.
great write

all the best and take care
5/5

Awww this is soooo cute, i loved it.. its shows how great of a poet you are, and you should be sooooo proud of this piece nice work 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Aww.. beautiful. beautiful and very sweet! i loved it! keep up the excellent work! 5/5
jessy

Know what I fount out that you are a very good poet and when i read this one it make me feel great coz i found another great poet in this site, and I really like this all the words you put and the flow was great excellent job

Geneross

Great range of words and i loved the 2nd stanza. it was very good. and the idea was creative. i really like the emotion u pour into it. and the ending was bold. no complaints here. i usually dont go for love poems in terms of reading them and taking time to comment, they all sound the same to me. but urs is an exception. congrats, it earned my kudos.
love ya lots,
sore

A tad confusing towards the ending, as to whether it happened or not, and the way you typed it out was a bit confusing too, but still I found that I really enjoyed this poem. It is beautiful. And I love how you "prayed" to forever. I love the imagery you create in your work!
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Charisma*
P.S. The numbers help me keep up with it!

I'm literally speechless...you are such and amazing poet. And I love how you personify Forever as though it were a person you could plea with. Truly, amazing. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Its very happy compared to your other ones... i like how you can write about opposite emotions, thats a great quality for a writer to have. so great job on that.