Nice..i have heard you say some of these things before at school and stuff but its about time you put it on here....and about my new poem...what are the mistakes? tell me...so i can make it better...well watever...lay...

~matt~

The ending is so sweet, I love that poem. Great job.

I like this poem Robert you can be so creative...although your flow was a lil off..i still enjoyed reading it....Miss ya...Love Joclyn

Hey money, this is the one you read to me walking home from expresso right, its really good...

Haha! that's funny... Its really good!
XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

Awww that's cute, I liked it a lot. Keep writing. 5/5

How cute! I love it soo much!!! >3

Too cute

I was looking for a poem to make me laugh..
and this poem did a damn good job!
it was really cute and funny
definetly cheered me up and put a smile on my face!!
good job!!
5/5

Lol that was funny. & it was really sweet the way that you ended it. Great job!

Wow that was so sweet i dont usualy like love poems of any kind but that was nice

Your good. and it was pretty funny and sweet.

I love this poems its sooooooo cute and AWESOME and very true!!! lol

luv luv, leah

OH MY GOD IF I WERE YOU I WILL GO IN LIVE POETY YOU R gr8

LOL Awwwww!! That was so funy about the being naked thing hahah! Wow! you know you weren't kidding haha!
I loved this poem, it was pretty funny and you ended of sweet....I wish I would have thought to write about this!
Good Job! 5/5
Chels

Wow that really sweet and really nice for a guy to say! lol l8

Heh good job :-)

OmG.....i LoVe iT....i TiNk DiS iS Da CuTesT FuNNi PoeM i HaVe EvEr ReaD....KeeP uP WiT Da GooD PoeMs....PeaCe OuT....

-patti-

This is so beautiful it reminds me of this boy who i've secretly been in love with for going on 8 years he said he wants to be the blood that flows thru my heart

Juicy secret

How funny and sweet! It is cool how you put it metaphorically so true. Great poem.