Oh huni I really hope you're Okay!! nothing is worth it believe me!! you're a gr8 person and you deserve the best =)
keep up ur talent and cheer up its not worth the depression *hugz*
Luv Ya
NemO XxXxXxXxX

Oh meeee geee!! that was just....so much to take in at once!!! it was an AMAZINGLY written poem! i really liked how u were writting to more than one person...just the way it clashed, made since! im so sry sis for mia&&ana but remember what i wrote u in ur emails...u dont need to be like these stick thin girls...u r PeRfEcT the way u r now!! i love u and ur beautiful!!
ur lil sis

Oh hun this is so sad, if somethings wrong you really should tell me about it so I can help you. You've wrote it perfectly, it all flows, it's clear in what it's about and it's worded nicely, but please, if any of this is true, talk to me ok hun
take care xox

This is really good. It's filled with so much emotion. Great job! I really liked this stanza:
You have been there for me
You helped me through it all
But I am depressed again
You can't catch my final fall
Really sweet. Great job! 5/5**

This is a fantastically written peice, great composition and progression with a well implimented structure. the actual content too is fantastic, powerfully expressive with a good use of description and feeling. as far as i can tell not a single flaw.

5/5

ps. i really hope that things start to improve for you and that the feelings you displayed within this peice do not last too long.

I really hope this isn't true! =/ am worried now. will you let me know you're ok? Have missed reading your poems, you're so talented, can so relate to this poem in particular, you express yourself so well hun, thankyou for all your lovely comments too recently they've been a lifesaver xxxx

I like this poem because I've got a sister who's going through similar problems so I knwo what it's like. I also feel like it's too much sometimes. Take care and stay strong,
XBlOodYtEaRSoFMInEX

Wow dis is really good

Wow i really loved this poem. i am in awe. it is unbelievably good. keep it up.

Why do you want to die i know that you are having bad times but every body hurts but you have to be able to trust in the Lord and he will see you through

Uhm...proper good!
but that is a serious thing to write about!
but that was a well nice piece..

♥LovinIt ♥

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Wow thats an awsome poems i hope you arnt goin threw this your self!
but its awsoem! i love your wrok!
great job
much love
always alana

Wow thats an awsome poems i hope you arnt goin threw this your self!
but its awsoem! i love your wrok!
great job
much love
always alana

Honestly I loved your poem. I could relate to it alot. You should check out mine if you want. Later

♥ Trista ♥

Touching poem
i can sense deep hurt in this poem
its good to vent feelings thru poems
5/5
love
amy

Waow!! dis was a really nice poem..well written..and extremely strong emotions shown shown perfectly in perfect words...although the rhyming scheme does seem a bit out of place at a time...(the first stanza) i think the words are meant to be...a great write..and thank you for the comment!
xxx :)
mezangel

Aw that is really sad & I hope that you don't really feel that way. The poem is really good & the flow & rhythm of it went along really well. Great job on this!

WOW, i loved it soooo sad and i hope it isnt true.. in the first stanza

Dear world, dear family
These are my last words
I really tried to tell you
But my screams wasn't heard

i thought might be better like this

Dear world, dear family
These are my last words
I really tried to tell you
But my screams were not heard

just my thoughts 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I absolutely LOVE this poem! its really good