Great poem, I love the lsat lines.
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Hey very good poem. i loved how u wrote it good job

Omg..this poem is amazing!

Wow.....Wow! lol. That was marvelous. You snatched the words from my lips lol. Keep it up!! GBU
Pepa

I love your poem, it describes perfectly being brokenhearted and wanting to move on. I loved the first two lines.

Good job1 5/5

Awh..Love it. Perfectly done, flow was amazing, it never lost us as we were reading it.

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