Through This Necklace

by rocker666chick   Apr 30, 2006


Through this necklace,
Your soul lies,
with me.
Through this necklace,
you handed it to me.
after your suicide,
That was the day I cried.
Even though you are,
still here with me now,
I know you will be with me
forever.
We may not be close,
but I know through this necklace
our love.
Will be with me,
I must never
take it off.
If I do,
I know I will get lost
without you.
My life that had just begun,
will be gone.
But I will not cause our love is forever.
Not just till someone says never.

I dedicate this poem to My uncle Patrick, I luv you so damn much!!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    I really liked this poem, I have to disagree with Elijah though...I think the slightly fragmented style gives the poems a really broken feel, which I think is what you were trying to get across. Equally however I would always suggest experimenting with rhyme and line breaks cause somtimes a little tweaking can turn a good poem into a great one, at any rate I loved it, so 5/5 x

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