Oh yeah girl this is what I call a poem - its raw, its deep and meaningful, powerful with beautiful; heartfelt intent. Its real, and yet its desperate and each line was just better than the next - I loved it I truly did. Your flow and use of language made it spectacular it had me captivated and drew emotion from me ont he subject at hand...I love your empathy and how you can try and see the best in all people and in the world - we need more people like you Chels we honestly do - fantastic write babygurl a well earned five, I wish I could rate higher this is one of your best yet darling!! Eirisa xoxo

^^ Well said... Took every word from my mouth (LOL!). A superb write Chels, truly spectacular!

Chelsey , you hold the heart of a girl way beyond your years . You always amaze me with your maturity , compassion and understanding to the world around you .Keep the faith Chels , and one by one the people of this world will see , believe and follow in your footsteps .

You may not realize the power behind your words, but Chels it only takes one person to make 10 others see , and those 10 make a 100 and those 100 make 1000 and so on........

Love ya A.I.D , for the beautiful heart that lays within !! Muah ! XXXXX

Chelsey-Lynn you rock!! A little later I'm going to print this out so I can post it on my bedroom wall when I get home. Besides being completely amazing, this poem speaks the truth. Awesome girl!!!

Wow, that was really good! You landed this one real good :D! Aweosme job! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .
*Just Lisa*