It was Me

by *Chels & Britt*   Apr 30, 2006


My best friend died today
It all came so quickly
The car shoved violently into hers
As if there was no other way

There she lay in her casket
Black wardrobes everywhere, worn
Tissues passed down the rows
People thumbing her funeral pamphlet

Speakers stood before everyone
As tears silently slid down cheeks
How could she really be gone?
Her life far too short to be done

I remembered her being the only friend
Who reached for my hand when I was lost
Who comforted my cries when I was sad
Now she's never coming back again

I got up to sing my sad song
One we had written together
No one looked up or even listened
Something seemed terribly wrong

All of a sudden my body lifted off the ground
I heard a voice inside me say
"Now you've seen what its like after death"
I knew I was now heaven bound

How could this possibly be?
I looked down in the casket
Sure enough, lying there
Was my own best friend..

...It was me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Unbelievably good!! wow-i dont even know what to say it was so good-wow....amazing job! definately 5/5---

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. that was an amazing twist at the end. Well thought out. Great job on this. It was an excellent poem! 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Amazing write! well done......
    keep it up! and thanks 4 ur sweet comments....

    luv
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Haunting ladies, very well penned and haunting - seriously a great write that has me fairly emotional. Brought back some horrible memories of a girlfriend I lost in a car accident a few years ago, it was actually two friends but one I was very close to...its horrible what tragedy can do to ones life and those people who are part of their life...I enjoyed this piece but the tears cannot help but fall ...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Ohhh This poem just gave me goosebumps.......seriously if you could see my arms right now !

    You both write some amazing poems together . I can see it now "a book of famous poems by :Britt and Chels " in the near future . Keep up the great writing girls ! I love to see a new poem by the both of you ......
    Muah ! XXXX

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