His Turning Point

by Ike Dizzle   Apr 30, 2006


(Yeah I'm finding alot of my old poems. Sorry if it's bothering anyone)

His Turning Point

They taught me to be sweet,
They taught me to be kind,
I did what they said,
and always paid my mind,
I did nothing bad to them,
But they still ignore me and paid attention to him,
I tried to give him the benefit of a doubt and say he was good,
But he was like the wolf in little red riding hood,
One day he pushed me too far,
It felt like my common sense was ran over by a car,
Soon my anger turned into sadness,
Then Dil started to obey me and my sadness turned into happiness,
That goes to show you,
Every apple has a bad seed,
But that bad seed has some good in it somewhere.

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  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    There is nothing wrong with posting old poems, i do it too
    this one was ok, i liked the begining much more then the end, it seemed like you suddenly wanted to stop the poem, even though there could have been more, which might have made it make more sense

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    The beginning was very nice! But then I kinda got lost in the end. Well actually were it talks about Dil.Sorry for not getting that part... but the flow was still pretty great!
    -cheers- ^_^

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