Comments : Close to death

  • 18 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    Its such a sad poem but it explains a lot about not liking your own life. I like it very much. 5/5 and keep on writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by kate

    You've communicated the emotions attatched in this poem really well. i like your writing style - it's good! keep on writing so we can keep reading! xxx