*true story* BECK

by louma   Feb 9, 2004


*this is a true story about my relitive*

Beck was a good girl
that no one could believe
her daddy and Mommy loved her
and sat with her on Christmas eve

everyone loved beck
she was such a good girl,
with manners and a smile
and hair that would curl.

one day
to the doctor for a checkup
beck and Mommy went
they waited for results
Finlay, the envelope was sent

Mommy was shocked
daddy didn't believe
how could Lil beck
get cancer this eve?!

they explained to beck
what Cancer was.
isn't that what god wants?
Lil beck asks

she wasn't afraid
beck was real brave
she was happy
she thought she was safe

Mommy daddy,
please don't cry
thats what god wants
why do u deny?

cant i just kill myself?
beck would ask.
our body is assigned to us to take care of, its a task...

daddy was reading beck a story one night
she asked him to put his head down.
she saw 2 flying men, waving @ her to come with them......

see you later daddy
beck smiled.
i promise we will meet again
this is not goodbye.

*plz comment & rate my poem*

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  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    this poem was so sad i hope u keep on writing u have tons of talent i loved this poem

  • 20 years ago

    by louma

    well anonymous, i wasnt trying to show talent, i was trying to tell the story and send a message to ppl...if you dont like it, stop reading my poems! im assuming u suck too..

  • 20 years ago

    by benneth

    well louma again you amaze me...nice job ;-D