by Kaylee May 1, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Verse One |
by nikki
This is b-e-a-utiful 5/5 great job this is just awesome i rly luv it |
by melly xx
Aww! |
by Synh
You should've put it in plain poetry form. But it was okay. 4/5 |
by Clarissa
Good job keep writing more songs =] |
by Sean Dohr
Much more meaning and depth in this poem/song. I liked it a lottt. Keep it up!!! |