What happened?

by Doug   May 1, 2006


I can't stand this anymore
I am thinking your a whoar
You said you not to worry
And we shouldn't be in a hurry
You said it was me you loved
And that he was just a friend
But look, your with him
He acts a little dim
And now I cant do anything
I wish something could be said
To make me feel better
And would make the feelings GO AWAY!
You never even say "hey"
Things have changed
Now we never hang out
Are we even friends?
Is this the end?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was good. But the rhyming seemed a little forced, Some of the words jus didnt go. And you spelled hoar wrong, it's 'w-h-o-r-e' [it wouldnt let me say it in the comment so i had to put it like that] just so you know. But work on it a little more, And it should come together pretty good. Keep writing! 5/5

    `taleee xx

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