Ooh nice work!!!
Quite witty as well.
Short and...smart.
Xx

I really liked this one. I could relate to it 100%!

This had a great flow to it, And rhyming was good. It could have been longer. But it's still great the way it is. I love it! 5/5

`natalie xx

Wow, excellent written, I loved this!

Love,
Line

Well Brig you came right out with this one. t was short, cutting all those hard sounds were really spat out onto the page. Very different from some of your other stuff. And the title reeled me in. I always like to give something constructive..but I cannot think of how you could improve this. Top stuff!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Really great stuff. Have to agree with Lost Laureate the structure gave it a really biting edge. Sharp and to the point, the rhyme really helping to hold it all together, really great. 5/5 x

That was very good alot of emotion in that one 5/5

Short and sweet and to the point. I like it. Keep up the good work... keep writing. 5/5

I liked the last line - people playing games with you is horrible, and if you win their game, you feel such triumph in your victory . . . It was a kind of twist I suppose, the sadness, hate and then victory. Nicely done.

Peace. [Sole]

I really really liked this poem. It held a lot of emotion. I would have liked to have read more. But great job! It was wonderful.

This was a good poem. I like the rhyme flow it was great. I love this style of poetry the most so I am very impressed!!!

That was good, a little too short for the topic in my opinion, the rhyme was ok, and i think you did a good job overall, congrats.
-Luke

This was a bit too short in my opinion beacause you could pack this with so much detail to back up the emotions you're showing us, or rather telling us. The twist at the end of the poem was kind of uplifting. Showing victory over supposed defeat.

I dont see why this poem has to be here it only contains 1 bad word so i suggest you change it like "poems about life, live, hate?" aight...jsut a little hint! =)

What a powerful poem, so full of anger and frustration...WOW!!! I really loved it, made me think about the times I hated my bf and just wanted to tell him to go to hell lol....Very well done =0) But sorry you have to go through this, some times love sucks..

Much Love Sabrina

Very good peice, powerfully written with some strong expressions. not overly keen upon the rhyming of "it" with "it" in the final stanza though... but other than this a great peice.

5/5

Short, but it told a tale. It had a nice, clean-cut edge to it that I liked.
Like a tear that you're trying to hide, telling the world that your eyes are dry, but only you can feel the pressure mounting up behind your face.

//Truest Lies//

Wow that was a nice poem... you can tell it has alot of emotion in it. and it told a great powerful tale.. nice job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This was beautiful. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Great bit of writting, the expression was strong and helped by your word choice and use of harsh tones and the rhyming and flow are also great. 5/5

I love this poem!!