Oh wow, this is incredible!
"Shadowed by the thunder
she wears it like a dress
Secrets worn like accessories
that she's longing to confess"
^^^ Everything about this stanza I love (especially this line, Secrets worn like accessories) WOW! Plus the ending was perfect... Love it! ;o)

Holly, this is absolutely beautiful, Kudos on a fine piece of work.

Warmest regards,

Steve

I thought this poem was awesome!keep up the great work. i hope to see more of your writing!!!!!!!!:)

I thought this poem was awesome!keep up the great work. i hope to see more of your writing!!!!!!!!:)

That was great! really, really great, well, i thought so anyway. it was very enchanting. i loved it throughout. i'm undecided as to what stanza i believed to be my favorite, but i think its between the opening and closing stanzas. which stanza is your favorite? anyway, i felt this poem was very creative and it possessed great imagery. thanks for sharing it.

Brad

WOW

There are hardly words to explain how I feel about this poem...

I was held captive by the imagery and left breathless.

I think that says it all but yet way understated...

I LOVE THIS POEM =D

Sarah-Joy