by BrokenMisery May 1, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Baptize me in holy water, |
by Clonjey
I guess I agree with Kevin, but then again, who says you have to follow a "rounded structure". I like your poem. Keep doing what you do. |
by Kevin
This poem could be great if you reworked some of the lines to give it a much more rounded structure in terms of flow and syllable count...as some of the lines..like the whole of the second last stanza. |