Angel Of My Pain.

by anonymous   May 1, 2006


Kill me please, I beg of you,
come and take me from this place.
take away all of my pain,
please put a smile on my face.

lift me higher then the rest,
hold me right up to the sky.
let me look down at my world,
laugh and sing my goodbye.

whisper your words of comfort,
and peel away my pain.
please help me to be happy,
make me smile again.

embrace me warmly in your arms,
wash me of my dirty sins.
take my life onto yourself,
and let the sadness win.

so kill me now, I ask of you,
and I will not ask again.
for your the one I turn to,
your the angel of my pain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lollypop

    Wow this is really good. It relates in so many ways. Keep it up!
    Love Ya!
    *Laura*

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Omg............great work

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    "take me life onto yourself" the “me” here should be “my”... sorry but it really annoys me when people do that... up until that point the piece is fantastic, unfortunately the flow got slightly disrupted by this grammatical fault... but I’ve read though once more ignoring this and the piece is fantastic. The flow and structure are perfect and the content very powerfully portrayed. Some good use of description within this piece and a few very well explored and expressed ideas. The interest of the piece is consistent and the strength of the content evenly spread throughout the poem. Overall the piece is fantastically written.

    5/5

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