My nightmare

by Kaitlyn   May 1, 2006


Watch the darkness erupt from above
Watch the pain embedded cease the light
Like the shadows of the moon
Or the rain that I indite

Watch the sun burn it's every light
That it created in its place
Or the light the stars lacked
In the pressure of its embrace

Let the reaper harvest it's needed
Reap my body dry
Then the afterlife takes its will
Watch my body slowly die

Watch the crimson tears I cry
And my body rot and decay
Watch my cold iced heart
Burn to an empty astray

Watch the fiery depths of below
Buy my soul for eternity and more
Watch it burn my every inch of insanity
Burn right into the core

Watch the poison intoxicated within me
Slowly change me and take its toll
Watch it flow through my veins
Watch it take its every control

Watch the knife amerce with my skin
Watch it make my blood chafe
Watch it flow my concerns through
Watch it make my soul unsafe

Watch my insides tear out within me
Twist and turn and knot
Watch my skin cease its every nerve
Watch it scab and fray and rot

Watch my lungs compress inside
And choke my every dream
Watch it test my ounce of limits
Watch it pressure me to extreme

Watch the soul collector embed me
Into his collection of a lost soul
Watch him conqueror over
The life of no control

Watch it make me endure
The pain that's just too much to bare
Watch me suffer immensely
In this life of my nightmare

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  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

    Thanks for the comment on my poem

    now onto yours.... wow, how fantastic you are a good writer, i could follow the flow of the poem without having to stop or get stuck on words that didnt work

    thank you for this amazing poem, 5/5 it was truly moving....

  • 18 years ago

    by Faye

    This is amazing!! So strong. I've never read anything like it. Makes me shiver all over I love it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tink

    This was perfectly written in my opinion. you eaisly made the reader feel the same emotion that you felt while reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    FOr a thirteen year old this poem wasn't that bad. It was dark, key element if you want to send shivers down your reader's spine, but it did repeat itself often. To avoid that try and use different words that mean the same and not many people would notice. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    This poem is intense and deep awesome i luv it ur a great poet keep up the good work 5/5

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