This is so sad Im srry about your father. My grandma died and i listen to a song on her c.d. to.

Mallori

I'm so sorry...just please, try to feel better. if there was some way to help, i could.

i think that poems written from the heart always come out really well, and this one did...keep it up

Yea I know what you mean when I write it's because I am releasing my pain or thoughts Keep it up I Love your writing it's so real! If you need someone to talk to im here:)

~Katie

Koolness and i do kno u in person do yah i kno wut...ur sitting right next to me but thats ok...nice poem...i liked the whole concept of it too..grrt work,
love ya lots,
sore

Huggggggggggggggg!

i hope you feel better
but i also want to let you know that it is ok to cry and greive, let it all out, it will help you to move on

Im soo sorry for your loss, I know how it feels to lose ppl you love, esp a parent,Great poem, def got my 5 vote, keep your chin up, keep writing and take care hun Sarah x