Insomnia?

Superb write, utterly brilliant from the beginning to the end. Every stanza holds fantastically described images. This is truly a breathtaking write. It's profound and vivid, and it has beautiful, poetical elegance within every line.
Also, I really like the flow of the whole poem, along with excellently conveyed message.

Ooh. this one is good too. mmm
maybe this one. i like it better than the other ones. i think so far this is my favorite that you have written.

I couldn't tell if the title was referring to the stanzas as dream sequences/random thoughts or if it was referring to the last line about sleeping.

I thought the last stanza ended the poem well, 'notion' is a very complete word, and made the poem feel finished. I thought the ABAB rhyme scheme was well done.

Excelent

Very random poem. I was thrown off by the title. I didn't think it had anything to do with insomnia, or was it because you wrote this while feeling the mood of fatigue? Very creative poem though, it let my imagination roam :)