Very well penned and excellent flow.
Keep up the good work.

Warmest regards,

Steve

That was a really good poem.. its filled with much so much emotion and you had a great word choice on this. My favorite stanza was:
If Casanova be fond of me,
Let us live tales of sultry bliss.
Trembling with a lover's plea,
Over each spontaneous kiss.
That really stood out to me.. and I really like the last stanza too. Great job on this!

This is quite an emotional piece it was enjoyable to read you've got quite a good writing talent here,
really good keep the good work coming.

gemma oxoxoxoxo

Very random poem. I was thrown off by the title. I didn't think it had anything to do with insomnia, or was it because you wrote this while feeling the mood of fatigue? Very creative poem though, it let my imagination roam :)

Excelent

I couldn't tell if the title was referring to the stanzas as dream sequences/random thoughts or if it was referring to the last line about sleeping.

I thought the last stanza ended the poem well, 'notion' is a very complete word, and made the poem feel finished. I thought the ABAB rhyme scheme was well done.

Ooh. this one is good too. mmm
maybe this one. i like it better than the other ones. i think so far this is my favorite that you have written.

Superb write, utterly brilliant from the beginning to the end. Every stanza holds fantastically described images. This is truly a breathtaking write. It's profound and vivid, and it has beautiful, poetical elegance within every line.
Also, I really like the flow of the whole poem, along with excellently conveyed message.