This is very good...lots of emotion...i know how u feel

Very good job hunny...maybe one of my fav. I really loved it...thanks for the comments on my poems! Much love

-kayla-

Great poem, absolutely loved it.

I give in to temptation
Every time I look in your eyes.
For every time I see you
That is where my happiness lies.

Very true, brilliant stanza. Keep it up. Thanks for commenting on mine. :-)

Best Wishes Always

I loved it! i can definately relate to it, unfortunately. you've got talent, keep using it. :D
thanks for commenting on my poem, i really apprediate it.

Thats great...wonderful rhymes...and a strong meaning...love it
5/5 ;)

" for an hour I forgot about the pain you've caused"

i love this statement because this is the way that I feel everytime my boyfriend/baby daddy comes over to visit. It's like we're inseparable and he loves me more than anything in the world, but when he leaves... i just want us to last forever but everyone knows that there is no happily ever after.