Comments : Shattered Dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by TheBeautifulStruggle

    Very nice. Comes from the heart. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by rainyheart

    This has alot of emotion i like it...i know how u feel

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    Very well written poem...deffinetly a 5/5
    but heres a tip: you should do spell check because you spelled alot of words wrong...although it could've been on purpose but im not sure
    good job!!