I really like this poem it says alot well keep up the good work your freind sarah

I think this is a lovely poem you put life to your words and i can see it in my mind. Very good keep writing anilov.

Great write stranger. I haven't seen you on here until now, and I only wish I had noticed you sooner. I have been away from the computer for quite a while though, and now that I am back I'm glad to have found such an inspiring write. I especially loved the last lines. ''For the last'' , it really shows you that any moment can be your last, and we Should live life to its fullest. Great job.