Everlasting footprint

by melly xx   May 1, 2006


Watching the sunset
at the egde of the beach
our feet atop the sand
with our toes just touching the ocean
i wonder...is this love?
a girl and a boy
hand in hand
with an everlasting footprint in the sand

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very nice, the 2nd line, the word, "egde" should be, "edge" Other than that very well written, short, perhaps making it longer would help.

    Peace, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    You got the imagination working all the time

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    Wow, I truly think this is YOUR style. It's like they made it just for you!!! You should try to write more poems with this format!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    This is gud, i like it, creates a picture in your head, xx

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