Who is this girl?

by sweetdreams16   May 1, 2006


Here she stands

Holding a razor

in her hands

Just one cut

and she will be free

And she can be

Who she wants to be

How can she live

in this tormented life?

Be a friend and pass the knife!

She looks

so lonely, sad and blue

she can never

see the light shine through!

Someone help here

someone see

that this girl is really me!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    I gave it a 5/5 because it had nice flow and expression. But my suggestion is to make a consistant stanza, either ABA or ABCB or ABAB so it doesnt mess with the readers mind.

    Stilll a 5/5 poem. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by S R P

    Good job, I liked this.