by sweetdreams16 May 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Here she stands |
by Moose
I gave it a 5/5 because it had nice flow and expression. But my suggestion is to make a consistant stanza, either ABA or ABCB or ABAB so it doesnt mess with the readers mind. |
by S R P
Good job, I liked this. |