Goodnight Love

by brianna   May 1, 2006


I loved you and it was true,
how otherwise, would i feel so blue?
you made me happy and i was glad,
now thinking of you makes me sad.
you left you heart open,
she fell right in.
you left me now,
and you are in sin.
the love we felt will always last,
if you don't hesitate to remember our past.
don't you wish life would treat you right,
me too, a kiss...goodnight.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Yay!! I loved this poem!! Try going for more complex words though it might help a bit! and the structure was alright but maybe you should try breaking it up into stanzas

  • 18 years ago

    by Bianca

    Exactly what Line said short and sweet, to the point, I like that keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Short and sweet

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