I loved the way you answered the question posed at the start of the poem - after moving through all the facts. Awesomely written, it kept the reader involved and loving every stanza.

Peace. [Sole]

The question was good but I noticed you used one question mark thoughout the whole thing. Maybe add some punctuation to keep the whole thing flowing a bit better. I think in one stanza you almost copied a line word for word twice, maye in two stanzas, and that just felt a bit off. It wa sa good poem and message none the less.

A really original spin on what is traditionally a very sensitive subject. I think this poem gives much to think about! Very well written the use of rhyme is flawless and never forced and gives the poem a really nice, even flow. Great work 5/5

Hey! luvd da poem hun it was great bt nex tym yr actly dwn read da poem uv jus ritn n hpefly itl hlp u reach da lyt at da end of da tunnel :) lve u x