Comments : You're my gift

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    This was such a cute poem and exquisite dedication.
    Wonderfully written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh sniff tear babes
    How bizarre that we both decided to write a poem on our care packages without even consulting each other LoL I loved this piece, as much as you loved your tim tams (mind you I have collected a nicer variety for you so you can share without being stingy lol) Its so nice for me to receive mail that isn't a bill and a poem to match that makes it even more special loved it chelly babes! Thanks for this poem :o)
    Hey and more importantly thankyou for giving me the inspiration to write again myself - you know what I have been like of late - dried up poet but your gift gave me something I hadnt been able to find in a while so thankyou my sugar plum :o)
    Loveyou Eirisa

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Chels, lovely dedication to your friend!

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Chelz, This is the second one I've read from you today and again I am crying. Such a beautiful and loving write for someone so special. It's a blessing to have someone like Eirisa come into your life. You both have such beautiful hearts and are so giving. Your relationship is one to be treasured. This is a beautiful, heartfelt and tear jerking write.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0oh that was such a beautiful piece. great j0b 0n this 0n. a sweet dedicati0n t0 eirisa. great use 0f w0rds. h0pe ur d0in well =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Cheals, what a beautiful dedication to eirisa, bless your beautiful heart, and i wish you have a great day, be safe.

    love & peace

    bert.

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Omg chelsey girl that soooooo totally rocked! what an awesome tribute...ive run out of good things to say for your awesome poetry :) Dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww its sweet like it alot

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryan

    Nice poem keep writing more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Oh my gosh yes tim-tams are the most amazing cookies ever i was in australia last summer ans we had those, well anyways i loved ur poem it was so sweet and yes love from people u care about si all you need~brittness

  • 18 years ago

    by claire

    I love this poem i like the way it related to me as my nan lives very far away from me n it takes ages for her pressie 2 get to me ne way it waz good 5/5 from me love claire xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    How , Oh How did I manage to miss all these poems of yours???? The little red numbers must not be working or something.....Geez I am so upset , I missed all these......Anyways enough of my complaining...

    It makes me smile to see two people have such a loving friendship as you and Erisa . It is just beautiful. And that video of you eating the tim-tams is just priceless. I loved it .....and I love this poem because it comes from the heart of a very special girl .....