Eternal Darkness

by elly   May 1, 2006


I lurk in the darkness
Humming a chaotic song
I keep trying to suppress
Images of things you've done

I keep walking with a withered soul
And I try not to look back
Because in my heart is a hole
Where there is something I lack

I don't know why I deserve this
Maybe I don't, but maybe I do
For now I just wait for Death's kiss
Because all I ever knew wasn't true

~~~~written like, forever ago. last year. comments appreciated~~~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Holly

    Again, Great Job! Wicked great. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. I like the way that you ended it. Some times some of the things we thought we knew turn out to be totally different. But anyway.. I get where your coming from & you've got some major talent. Keep writing. I can't wait to read more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Nice lil poem. if it was written forever ago, then i want to see some of your newer stuff, this definetly showed potential. take care and thanks for you comment,
    -Luke

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