An interesting poem with a lot of emotion put into it. I felt like the flow was a bit rocky, but that also seemed to work as you were trying to portray the frazzled thoughts of someone's mind, decided if the were going to leave or stay. Staying is always the best idea, just as a bit of advice from someone who has seen a lot of the world and messed up a great deal already on my own.

-Tainted Mikochan

I wrote it when I was angry so I dont guess I noticed how rocky it was....

Thanks