Well done! I'm glad to see you participating in the threads....
You wrote this with some beautiful imagery especially this part:

"I see it sparkling,
hear the music as it falls,"

Truly enchanting read...Take care and keep it up~Holly

Oh and you can post this in the TOW thread if you want :)

Thanks for participating in the TOW, i'm glad to see you around the club. this poem it;s a nice discription of water and the many ways it can be seen and how it plays a role in almost everyday life. good job.

~Jacklyn

Good job! I really enjoyed this poem, especially the ending. Very nice...
Take care and keep it up~Holly