Sean-
Very nice write, it's evident that you sincerely feel what you wrote here.
This poem reminds me so much of my own grandfather...He was a very selfless & giving man...he would give you the shirt right off his back & soooo soft hearted :)

Aren't grandpa's the greatest??

Take care!

Great poem. I wish I had a Granddad like yours :) It's nice to think of people like that in this hating world . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Oh wow, this is a very beautiful poem, and it is wonderfully well penned. I wish there were more great people such as your grandfather in this world. It would be such a nicer place. I know so. Keep up your great work! 5/5

I like it, it really good

Fantastic poem, The wording is great, and it flows perfectly, great job, keep writing and take care Sarah.

"A man of age and wisdom,
of courage and of might.
Does what's best for others,
but not always what is right."
that stanza really tells the truth
the poem wa sreally enjoyable
5/5

I thought it was great! Very good! I liked it a lot! 5/5!

This is really good. It's very descriptive & the flow & rhythm was perfect. It is a really strong poem & gives me a feeling of greatness. This is really good. Great job! 5/5**

Sean,
I'm absolutely loving your poems!
Particularly this one

You are a tallented young poem this one is my favorite so far

I like your use of question at the end, This poem made me feel really calm at the end.

I agree with SilentDreams i liked the ? at the end!! Great work!!! Keep it up!!! 5/5!!

I absolutely love this stanza

"A man of age and wisdom,
of courage and of might.
Does what's best for others,
but not always what is right."

^^ so true.. nice write 5/5

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