This Is A Great Poem That Showz Your True Feelings...Hope To See More Of Your Poems Soon Enuf...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

Good job, just remember, whenever you feel like sh*t you can always talk to me man. I know alot of how you feel. Just remember that if you ever need someone to talk to, there are hotlines you pay to talk to... lol jk just come to me I will try my darndest to help. :)

Aww.. this is so sad. I could relate to it in so many ways. I love your poems.. they are so amazing and really sound like you wrote them straight from your heart. Another amazing poem. Great job on this!

Awwww.. all your poems that ive read are so sad and seem to be about the same girl.. im so sorry.. i can so relate.. things get better hang in there 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow that was so incredibly sad. A tear jerker. I don't know what else to say about your poems, all of them carry the same perfection honestly.

"Her doors are shut,
when I open myself to her.
Her eyes are closed,
when I show her I care."

Those lines were stunning to me for some reason, since I feel I could relate to it so much and I really understand where you are coming from...Never give up writing, you will always shine. 5/5 xxx

David, that's so sad. But very good :) I liked it a lot. You know i'm always here for you, right? You sould know that after all this time. It's really a good poem, I just hope that everything isnt always crappy... You deserve the best

Love Always
~Casey J