Wow what an intense and powerfully written poem - I loved some of the early stanza's and mild references you made to religion (perhaps just my interpretation). Masterfully crafted - very poignant imagery. The first two stanza were amazing. I liked your stuff!!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

p.s some of my later poems may interest you such as 'forgers way'...etc..not here to promote so...Welldone on an excellent poem..

Wow, so powerfully written! Excellent use of language and the message was wonderful... Really awesome poem!

Damn Steve... Your poems are always so beautifully written. This one is just amazing, so very powerful. Another beautiful write.

Wow!!!!!! Steve, this left me breathless! I think your writing can make a huge difference to people.

i am completely awed by your mastery of words and emotions!

good luck and peace always
shobhana