I Totally Understand How You Feel.
Wonderful Writing.
Although,
I'm A Total Freak About Grammar
So Hence The 4 Not 5.
Keep Up The Good Work Though,
Very Well Done.

Thanx for the comment, hun! I really liked this poem. It sounds like something I went through recently.Keep up the good work. And keep commentin mine and I'll do the same!XOXO

I liked this one... i think its a lil sad that you feel so upset over a guy when ur so young tho. although in saying that, at your age i was living with a guy and had a daughter.

dont worry hunni, as you said to me it dont last long and soon you'll be feelin right as rain again. i know i am. hehe.

dont ever settle, and dont ever let a man think he can make u settle. aim high and kick the losers off ur feet!!
kisses,
mandie

WOW..that had some force!!
Very good flow and great word choice but im hope it was just ART not your real life...life is meant to enjoy no matter what ya going through..im sure your a happy girl though...
HEy thanks for your comment on my lyric/poem 'It's you.' I was surprised by how much you related to it...you intrepreted it perfectly...all that was going through my mind when i was writting it/playing it-- i appreciate the feed back and its the best when someone out there relates...cuz that poem is all true and im going through it...its so hard....the girl im with is amazing but shes not stephanie..ya KNOW? argh...i'd be nice if i could find resolve with her but its always left open but i know i can never have her cuz of our different faiths---thats what it comes down to sadly---N E WAYS thanks and good day to you