by Chantelle
This poem is really good, flows well, shows alot of emotion and you ended it well. Great work hun xx |
What a depressing poem...all your featured poems I noticed were very sad...the continuous use of questions worked well...and the final lines heightened the sadness...well written...I hope all is well... |
by Lexi
Lol thanks another 5/5 i would give you more. I love how you write poetry keep it up! |
by lisa
I like it!! It helps me connect to myself that is awsome!! |