Labeling You

by Torn   May 2, 2006


They're staring at you,
Labeling you as you walk.
Before they've met you,
Or even heard you talk.

They're judging you now,
Playing their little game.
"I wonder what she's been through,
Whether it's justifiable pain."

They're talking about you,
Constantly putting you down.
To make themselves feel better,
To bag your constant frown.

* * * *

They're open-eyed, staring down.
Looking at your sick, twisted body,
You're distinguishable frown.

There are tears in their eyes,
As they drip down their faces,
For one second they question their lies.

[Part 2..coming up:)]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Wow, good write, I'm looking forward to part two. You have a unique style - refreshing. Good job!

    Carlee

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Wow... this poem was incredible, I liked it alot. 5/5

    JP

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    I feel that, the labeling. You're 'diferent'' therefore it's their excuse. Grr.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello huni!
    I like this poem thou I didn't get any point.hehe!!
    absolutely 5 ;)
    Keep it up
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello huni!
    I like this poem thou I didn't get any point.hehe!!
    absolutely 5 ;)
    Keep it up
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x